All Comments on 'Pink Lemonade Ch. 04'

Great writing.

With the chess moves in this story made by the consultant of crime thwarting investigations into the Oldeeds Group, Superior Bloodlines and exposing various agents of the government, while moving Sharples to the SBI; you have shown how formidable the mind of the Shadow Man is.

However, with an ending like that you have to have Donald Troy take down someone or something major in your next story, as a comeuppance that does damage to the other side.

Also when will the Miltons and Troys have a foursome with some group sex? Such a meeting is long over due.

the King's attitude will be his downfall, as with all people, that have that kind of attitude..the crowbar is a step ahead of the king, because he has gotten inside the kings head mentally, pulling those threads, that he shouldn't know about, but actually does. '

I have read all your stories and enjoy them even if I do skip over the sex parts. It is a very good detective story. Love trying to figure out who the bad guy is and I keep coming back to the retired chief but it could not be that simple. I will keep reading them if you keep posting them.

off a long time, hope your health is ok. just hoping for my story fix

So many twists and turns

*****Good read. Thanks for sharing.