All Comments on 'Pink Slip-pery Slope'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Any chance of Part 2

Of course in Part 2 Rob knocked up daddy's daughter Julie, they get married and he becomes a Company VP....

XXXX stars

mentalmanmentalmanabout 10 years ago
no way......

... no way could anyone read this and NOT give it it five stars. Perfect blend between story line and heat, and mechanically well written to boot. Awesome job! You are definitely in my top tier of Lit authors. And that tier has a total of four members. Thank you for sharing your talent with us

C_frommnC_frommnabout 10 years ago
Part 2

Like the story and the emotions he goes through when he finds out she's the boss's daughter. but now that they have worked that out maybe Bossman can call him in and threaten to fire him if he does not step away from his Daughter and Daughter and Mother can come down on Daddy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

hot but the girl isn't believable at all as an 18 y/old. she talks and acts like a 25 y/old so why not just make her the age that suits her character instead of this 'barely legal' shite

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Eat it up.

Superb writing. You have an amazing talent for telling a story. When she bent over the arm of the couch, he should have dropped to his knees and eaten her bum hole out before he banged her. You get 5 stars and a favourite on the author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It left me hanging. What happened when her father found out she was dating her????

jsch1947jsch1947over 1 year ago

Brilliant,...but

Absolutely, positively too short!!!

She acts like she has a couple years of hard fucking under her thong.

18, really?

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