All Comments on 'Pinned to the Pine'

This author's first submission is a well-crafted love story placed in a somewhat unusual setting. The build-up is carefully done, and thankfully not too rushed. However, the introduction to the characters needs to be embellished, and the love scene that follows is regrettably short. The story has been placed in the Erotic Couplings category, but the Romance genre would have been a little more accurate.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story, maybe one page to many thpugh