All Comments on 'Pipestone Bible Camp'

Summer camp is more fun for some people

At least it was for Melanie. It's probably good she didn't wind up at the conservative Bible college, but I'm wondering if Kurt's influence will lead her into sin. But then, a lot of people have been lead astray in the heat of passion.

Good story. Good luck in the contest.

If I had ever gone to Summer Camp, .....Nice if there was an extended version or at least a part 2.

Don't tempt me, FineGoldWine - I'm working on a series, two entries for the Halloween thing, a couple novels, and you know... life. I might do more with Melanie and Kurt eventually, though.

Thanks!

Great premise.

But each sex scene starts too abruptly, and then rushes ahead.

Needs more in the way of preliminaries. More foreplay. More dialog during the foreplay. More involvement of other bidy parts: her breasts. her ass, his balls in addition to his cock.

Four stars.