All Comments on 'Pirates and Disney Princesses'

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Liked the concept and the tie to the old Halloween myths

"She wasn't sure why, but she did feel she could trust him." Lost all credibility.

Nice gentle story. Waiting for the sequel ! Russ0072

Made me cry, So beautiful. Thanks

@Bierce--Thanks! I just got off of Facebook, and I was trying to click "like" on your comment. :)

Thanks also to everyone for your votes and comments. I was afraid I wouldn't even get the 25 votes to qualify, and I've had 144 in the first two days. Now I believe the guy who wrote the article on "Why You Should Enter Contests."

@the Anonymous with whom I lost credibility--I understand. My husband kind of felt that way too. I think it's a male/female thing. I think women are more intuitive about whom they can trust--though we are frequently wrong in the long run!

Hey there! Very hot, fun story! I liked the mirror angle with seeing him/not being able to see him. Clever! And your line about how she would dress in a different style every the day and her friends would never know which she would be made me smile. Very romantic, overall. :)

I will say, though, it is making me very glad I didn't go with my original entry to the contest - because it was eerily similar in premise to this one. I mean, other than the locale was different, *really* similar. Would have felt like we were wearing the same dress to the party! Hehe!

I'll have to check out your other stories. Cheers!

From your title down. I thought this was a stellar effort. Great use of the Halloween theme and making it integral to the story, not just having regular action take place at a costume party or be spooky. Pacing was great - the reveal about Mikey in the middle and her not recognizing him at first was perfect. If your Anon reader had kept going, s/he would have seen the same. Very hot action, very creative and true to life. Great characters and the dialogue really gave them a relationship. Wonderful story all around, one of the best of the Halloween Contest so far.

Excellent story. The mirror piece was very well done.

I rarely give 5* ratings, but you got one!

John

What a story...wish was mine..Her name was Anne and has been gone for several years..Maybe this Halloween

This is a beautiful story that made me cry a few times... I just wish I had known because crying wasn't my intention when entering this site.

Definitely keep writing but maybe add a bit of a description at the top?

Loved the theme and how she wove it into the story. Tragedy turned into a lost love finally returned. Loved it !

Great story. Cried a few times from own loss. Keep up the writing!

Touching and sexy!

The title threw me but the story was perfection. I smiled throughout and cried. Loved everything about it and wish for so many who've had this type of loss it was true. You have a contest winner!! Good luck!