All Comments on 'Pirates Cove'

Loved it! Just wish the ending could have been a bit more "finished". After a good long read, it ends too abruptly, sorry, but that's my take.

Great Story - loved the way it gently developed.

Any chance of Part 2 sometime?

Mate, I don't know how you do it but all of your stories are fantastic. Keep up the good work!

Quite a involved story with lots of good sex, I thoroughly enjoyed reading the well writen story. The whole story seemed as if it were some one's true experence. Well done! Thanks for all the time and effort that it took to post such a fine story.............Rich

This was another very awesome story with a lot of twists and turns and of course hot sex. I do hope there will be a chapter two to at least confirm the suspision the Jack found the diampnd neckless.

Hey Really enjoyed this long and detailed story. Erotic story telling does not need to be without a storyline.

but I wanted more David & Amber, and incest generally . As in "all the walls come tumbling down". Otherwise, great story.

really looking to some incest too!

Anyway good story!

But the end was all of sudden!

How does everyone celebrate the big find? There are some things that have not been explored as yet.

This is one of the most erotic stories that I have read. It reminds me of a houseboat trip that we toook with some friends one summer

amber or lucy? amber or lucy? amber or lucy?

Ten people (or five couples), $50k. $8333.33???

Liked the story, wish there where more. Still a 5 for me.