by opels
You have done a wonderful job with this piece. I love the build up, how they both have conflicted emotions and everything flows so easy.
Can't wait for more.
Absolutely beautifully written...please don't make us wait for more too long !
Excellent story, sorry I didn't comment on the first chapter. But I am glad I didn't, because I was able to read of strong woman meeting a strong man and seeing the beginning of a great mating or merging together.
Their attitudes to each other are a little off and do not really seem authentic but who really cares. It's a good read.