All Comments on 'Pisstory Pt. 01: Small Town Carnival'

Excellent story, well written, very discriptive. Keep'em comin'! 5 stars

This is in the absolute top of what is available here: great storyline and superb style. A pro-writer's work! More please.

Fantastic story; brilliantly written :)

Many, many thanks! I've been writing in various genres for nearly 30 years, but seem finally to have found my niche. I really appreciate the positive feedback.

Thank you! I do try!!!

Loved the pissing!!

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

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Just want to echo the above comments. Really well written - thank you for taking the time to entertain us. You painted a very vivid picture - easy to become part of the tale.

Absolutely wild to find this wonderful story just a week after first being introduced to Bakhtin and his work but it feels like kismet. Wonderful writing!

Wonderful! You, Sir, are either an incredibly lucky man or perhaps an incredible author with a vivid imagination. Whichever way the wind doth blow, please continue to pen these excellent tales.

Absolutely five stars! Not only atmospheric and lewd, but intellectually robust. Running across the discussion of Bakhtin and Carnival was a bonus. If you are also familiar with Bataille, you might want to give my stories a peek.

Great to find you. Brightened up my Sat. morning b4 a spot of gardening in the winter sun..Was listening to Tim Buckley as I was reading your lovely sexylit. story .. for an absolute 1st. I looked for longer , rather than usual agony of reading the long-winded . Thanks .