All Comments on 'Pitching the Tent'

I'm sure Jack will be impressed with the well pitched tent! I imagine she won't tell him she had help, now will she? 5*

Wish you would use your powers for good.

I do love the lines " I simply forgot the guy lines" and " Let me see if I can find the tent flap". I likely would have gone too punny with them though. I commend the restraint in that regard.

Lame

Whimsical.

Great story by on e of my favorite authors.

I am leaving a good comment.

She deserves what she got. Still it was allin good fun.