All Comments on 'Pivotal Points'

#1 on the Peter Meter tonite! Your use of language is skilled and fascinating; your ability to stretch out the almost unbearable eroticism is something I want to experience again and again.

Thanks again

A very original and well written story.

I loved your attention to detail and the fact that you just didn't rush head-on into the sex.

You have made me a fan.

Thank you.

loved it wish u had brought maggie into for some lesbian

fun

Well Done! Enough so, that it got me to post my first comment ever. Your pacing is excellent and character developement totally believable. Hope to see you again soon.

You were on target as usual. Thanks for drawing out the tension and the slow build up. Do it again.

Beautiful story very well written and a very sensitive approach I am now off to check out any more of your submissions

I wish everyone could write with the feels you did...GREAT story

... except agree with the laudatory comments this wonderful story has already attracted. Tender, loving, beautifully told, splendidly paced...and incredibly erotic tension from the start. Thank you!

Wish I could write as well. Very nice story to read and take to bed to think about. More of your writing would be welcome in this site.

A happy admirer

A great story, it's so good to get some humour in to an erotic story.

I would suggest a glossary for our cousins who don't know what an ASBO or an A level are, in US written stories, it is so annoying to read about things which make sense to Americans but are meaningless to us.

Loved it,have a feeling this story is going to be a favorite of many for a very long time.

ENJOYED IT

Another brilliant and original tale by this talented lady! She well understands both a young man's natural lust for his mother's cunt, the very cunt he came out of, and a mother's natural hunger for her son's big prick which she sees bulging in his pants and feels pressing against her whenever they clinch. Rob's funny and highly energetic as a beginning actor, and mom appreciates him as the sexy male she needs. Her boy is at an age when he's testosterone-fueled from his hot young balls, his savvy mother intends to harvest that rich ball cream for her oozing twat. Of course, that's exactly where Rob intends to spurt it, as any normal son would. Motherfucking is the fastest growing trend in the country among bold young men and their sophisticated mothers. It won't be long before Rob fucks a baby up his mother's cunt.

long build up but great ending. Could have gone a little further with some anal action.

Your comment as follows is disgusting;

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And we got exactly what we paid for. "1*" .

Very nice ...longer sex next time

Being a nurse I always look for a mention of birth control or a previous hysterectomy. Accidents happen. Thank you for writing.

I loved the story and how you worked everything in.

Great set up.

Just when it comes to the goods maybe throw a little more, do us all a favor (;

Mother/son is my favorite incest followed by sister/brother. This was well presented and actually had a good moral, his character had much improved. Thank you for writing.

a good story but took 2 long 2 get 2 the jusey parts

Too long, too damn limey.

Erotic and well written. Give me more please

Lovely sexy story. Very believable as actors often fall in love with there co-actors when acting opposite them.

This was written over a decade ago.

Just read the follow up and its not so good.

Going to read more stories.

Keep writing.

REgards

OUTSTANDING !!!!!!!!, Both the play and

also your writting of this story.The players

were great,the story real,and maggie was

a bullie. But she got you 5++******

..THANK YOU..

I am a romantic and ardent reader of mutually consenual incestuous love stories, especiually between mother and son. this is one of the author's best. The author has developed has characters in depth and breadth. The plot is logical and believable. As one who has no problem with mutually consenual incest (e.g. no positional power play; no threat of emotional or physical abandonment; and no threat or actual emotional or physical abuse) in real life, I imagine this is exactly how such a relationship would develop. Through this story, there is noting but unconditional love, respect and emotional sensitivity to each other's needs and wants. There is no self-loathing, guilt, self-doubt nor self-recrinimation between lovers once they acknowledge that love has no boundaries. Athrlu beautifully written love story.