All Comments on 'Pixie, Joy and Me Ch. 03'

Each chapter that you write in the series seems to be getting better. I like how you introduced Katie and Dan to the story with Doug and Melanie. I love how you wrote the the sex scene between Katie and Doug and how he taught her things to do to Dan. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter.

OK I had to stop at the end of page one for a moment to comment. Another continuity error. Doug was supposed to be married to Pixie with 2 kids Before the plot of "The Loving Porn Queen" took place. Now I know you said at the beginning of each chapter of this story that it's an embellishment of that stories characters, but to me that just means spin off (same characters, same back story) you even mentioned it at the beginning of chapter 1. changing the back story and more importantly the back story and there for the ages of all involved in BOTH series is not only confusing but frustrating for someone like me. I thought Doug was the BIG brother to Kara (may be wrong, but don't think so). I would suggest if you do something like this again. I would take the time to explain the changes (how you embellish the characters) to cut out these issues. I almost want to give just 4 stars because of this but I CAN'T...lol 5 stars

I'm glad that they never watched the movies... Lol It help assuage my frustration with the error I mentioned in my previous comment. Another 5 stars