All Comments on 'Plan B: Little Bro Helps Sis in-law'

by katiepj

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madengineer3madengineer3about 15 years ago
Wonderful Beginning

What a tease! The author gets us almost to the peak of the plot, and stops. To be continued..... I hope so, if the rest is as hot as this it will be a winner.

SqueezeBabesSqueezeBabesabout 15 years ago
Awesome!

I hope she doesn't get pregnant right away, :-p

Can't wait for Part II

marklionmarklionabout 15 years ago
Nice Story!!!

That was a nice story that you wrote about about a brother helping another brother have a baby with his wife. It was sort of funny that they blindfolded both the brother-in-law and the wife prior to having sex. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 15 years ago
Clever idea

And well-written, too. Next chapter, please.

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
What you have written so far is great...

BUT WE ARE STILL WAITING FOR THE CONTINUATION THAT YOU PROMISED. More is not always better, but it would be in this case.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
I am happy for his success, but

In a story about Tony, Andrew, and Sarah,

"Tom had plenty of work as a builder and they finally purchased their first home."

Who is Tom?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
?

Is this incest? ZERO blood relation and not a step sister.

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