All Comments on 'Plans of the Sisters'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
5 FOR A STORY thar was a lot of fun to read.

The twist was very satisfying and the end made me smile. What more could I ask for?

Omart57Omart57over 4 years ago
Fan-fuckin-tastic!

I loved it! Lucky guys!

Rdk781Rdk781over 4 years ago

Nice start hope you will add too it maybe send them out on adventures

Rockstar601Rockstar601over 4 years ago
Mistake

I accidentally pressed 4 stars when I was really going for 5!!

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Very Nice

A very satisfying read, I could have done without the boys experimenting with each other but only because I didn't think it added anything to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

This is some shit my own sister would plan out... Or I would, to have her. Hottest fucking read I've found all week!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Only bad thing I can say about this story, it's too fucking damn short. A great read. Could have been longer, I loved it, 5 stars again...

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...