All Comments on 'Plausible Deniability'

Backstory should have been the main story. David, Mary, and the funeral, should have been the prologue and ending.

Nicely done!

Good story!

4

I'm not sure this falls into the LW category, but nice story.

The story needs more details and there is very little emotion

Nice little story and I found it interesting but there's no way my wife is going to keep a secret about exactly what she was doing. Just doesn't work for me. It seemingly turns out OK in the story but a husband and wife should never have a secret this big. I would have lost all faith and trust in her even after she belatedly revealed what she did doing. What else is she capable of hiding would always be on my mind. Gave you a 4* as it was different and interesting.

Interesting story, but troubling. I really don't see the need for secrecy and I don't think I could show the patience of her husband. However, it was interesting. Thanks for sharing.

David's reaction to finding out is too muted. Other wise a good story.

Something new. Thanks

That was a very interesting story. Plausible deniability indeed. 5*.

Wrong category. Wife’s big secret made no sense unless she was going to leave David at the end and run off with the money. he patiently sits around for months waiting for his absent wife who “Can’t tell him what she is up to? Not likely! They meet at the graveside and it is “OH Hi, thought that might be you…” Neither of them wants to know if they are siblings or “Just Cousins”? Sorry, don’t real Incest stories for a reason, and this was an excellent example of why.

Its not that out of the ordinary- in fact marrying your cousin is pretty common in missouri and other red states in the southern united states- while southerners have sex with their siblings all the time, marriage is still not allowed

Good story. There was a movie where the hero found his long time lover was his half sister. When she said she had a hysterectomy. They agreed, no problem. Let us continue. So the calm conclusion doesn't need an explanation.

Excellent twist.

Well written, fun, but the end was a pulling the pin on the grenade.

And as incest gets you dickie hard, next time out it where it belongs. Honestly that part of this story was troubling to read and may expose to us a sickness you might have.

South of the Mason/Dixon, huh!

Different, unusual in a positive manner. Well written with few mistakes thatbcan be read through. 4 stars

Interesting and unique , however it was a bit confusing as it became complicated , but it seemed to work , I don’t know why it worked but it did . If it wasn’t for the complication I’d have given you 5 stars , you still earned 4 though ! Good work !

I hate loose ends but I loved this story - very unique. 5*

An interesting plot line, is she or isn't she...

Sister or first cousin neither is legal in most areas. Divorce the bitch and take her to the cleaners financially then find a better wife.

Decent story, but had some problems. I don't think most people could live a happy relationship with that unknown. If they are first cousins, then at least some places accept it. There is also a big question about if they have kids. Not sure if this should have been in the incest category.

Nice one. And original.

Halfway through, I didn't think this was 5* material, but finally decided it was.

What FireFox and Just Words said.

Very interesting story.

Yes, they should know if they are having children. Anonymous DNA tests with genetic screening. First generation sibling incest generally carries a 1% increased risk of birth defects. from 5 to 6%. This is likely half-sibling; if so an even lower risk is present. I see no moral shame in inadvertent sibling incest. There are good reasons for society's views on the matter but under certain circumstances .....

That was different. Unusual LW or sister story.

Not a bit of ‘adventurous wife’ (or big sister) in this tale. Try Non-Erotic (itself an odd category in LitErotica!)

Interesting and imaginative story. Nice, tight and compact. 5/5!!

Anything can and most likely will happen in this life of ours. LP

I'm a foster child since I was years old. I know nothing about my biological father except his name. I always wondered what would happen if I fell in love with a girl and she turns out to be my biological cousin. I don't even know if I have a biological sister from my fathers side and what would have happened if I had met her and fell in love with her.

So I can comprehend this plot.

This is a fine story as it is. There’s no need to write anything additional.

Unless YOU decide you really want to.

this was a decent story but i saw it going in another direction. Him getting fed up and leaving her, divorce and her finally fessing up to what she was doing after a while.

A unique story line. Well done.