All Comments on 'Play Date with Pam'

This is a hot story. Beyond that, the male character HAS character. His perspective is good as shown by the interchange in the park where he expresses his views on his missing play date.

The writing is excellent!

Very, very good. You have a very empathetic view of middle-aged, thick-middle lust. I'm eager to follow this story as it unfolds.

I'm not usually a fan of adulerous relationships but this guy has some class. He's more than willing to hop in the sack with any woman who catches his fancy; but he also wants them to be in lust with their husbands and more importantly, for the husbands to lust after their wives. The sex is real and it's intense. Great work!