All Comments on 'Play Testers Wanted Pt. 12'

Another top-notch chapter. I was hoping for something good to read and I got it thanks to you.

Nice touch keeping the 2 Hans Cristian Anderson princesses together

This by far is one of your best writings! I look forward to the continuing journey. Btw I started following since a yearafter your first post. Excellent works!

I am so glad this one has been received so well. I received an email with a few questions i'd like to share here. The funny thing is the next installment addresses these questions. Not in any given order here we go. 1. Ghost's home base / tower. After his mission with the Dark Tower his base got an upgrade. I plan on touching on that. 2. What ever happened to the Exomorph? Well, she has been, along with the resurrected predator, protecting the tower from other PC's in a tower raid aspect of the game i haven't gone into yet. 3. What happened to the guardian predator? He's been guarding the tower and Ghost's possessions and trophy's he stores in the tower. I'm sorry i haven't touched more on these items. I've focused on the game and 'real' world events. I also plan on following up out of game plot lines. If you have any suggestions or questions drop me a line here or by email through my profile here. And yes, since the crossover installment went over so well I plan on writing a second or more for your consumption. Once again, i hope this finds you healthy and well and take care during these trying times. LB

First off I must say you are an exceptional story teller. Secondly besides legacy this has been my favorite storyline. Third I was hoping like a few of my other favorite writers on here you had an Amazon account where I could purchase your stories. Thanks for all you do and keep up the great work.

A great story and I truly hope all is well with you and yours. I can't wait for you to continue this saga.

Good episode. Jumping around in time, across space, and into dimensions where Time and Space have no meaning makes for a very confusing story.

The Tentacle Sex is grotesque. There has been more Tentacle Sex in this story than Male/Male sex! There hasn’t even been any Female/Male sex while Booker is in any of his Female Personas! Why?

For fracks sake, Booker had sex with Beast Girl when she was half-dog! I bet you would put in a scene with Booker fucking Beast Girl as fully Dog, before you will show Booker pleasantly and willingly penetrated by a Male character, or even a Female character in a Male persona! What if Steph Strange becomes a Man again? Will Ghost reject her, or will he fuck her ass, while giving the Sorceress Supreme’s cock a nice reach-around? Would Gwen or Shuri or She-Hulk suck Doc Strange’s dick? Could they let Doc Strange fuck their ass? If they could, why can’t Booker?

In response to GrantLeeStone; Clearly you wish to see some 'Sword-fighting' and/or 'sword-swallowing'... well perhaps you should do one of two things: either close this story and read one in the 'Gay/homosexual' category, or you could alternately, WRITE YOUR OWN FUCKING STORY and quit your bitching.... just sayen.

Only a couple of complaints. If you murder someone they are dead. It would be uncommon to say I am going to murder someone to death, more likely I am going to murder such and such. Second tentacles from either octopi or squids have very nasty hooks as well as suckers. I knew a diver who was night diving off the Mexican coast not far from California when they were surrounded by a school of squid. One brave one about 24 inches long grabbed him and drug him down. He managed to escape it's grasp but he still has nasty scars. A tentacle is not something you would want stuck in any orifice of you body. Other than that great story!