All Comments on 'Play Testers Wanted Pt. 17'

can't wait for more of this story

Wonderful writing as always thank you for writing

I'm loving it.

I’m utterly confused by this story.

Does gostfire still exist? He was originally the character caught up in all the time travel destiny stuff.

Been enjoying the story so far but this chapter was confusing. It may have closed some time loops but they’re from so long ago it’s hard to remember exactly what was going on. And I’ve been reading it nonstop for the last couple weeks and haven’t had to wait for any new chapters.

I noticed your chapters are getting shorter. To me, this indicates that writing this story is becoming less fun for you.

Not the best you have written, I must admit I had to force myself to keep reading at times.