All Comments on 'Playing His Game'

"If her panties match her bra when you take her clothes off, it wasn't you who decided to have sex...."

Nice, sweet, short and to the point.

Thank you,

Axelotto

Nachdem ich das Vorwort gelesen habe war mir der Inhalt der Geschichte schon fast egal. Denn mir wurde wieder einmal bewusst wie schnell das Leben wie ich kenne und schätze sehr schnell vorbei sein kann. Manchmal reicht ein kleines Virus oder ein großer Idiot um alles zu (zer-)stören.

Die Geschichte zeigt zu meiner großen Freude, das es Ada wieder besser geht und ich mich wieder auf unterhaltsame und anregende Geschichten freuen kann.

fantastic story, and I hope your recovery continues, just glad to hear you're doing better

Different and very interesting.

Great story!

Sweet story of who is chasing who. Thank you.

Cute story. So glad you and your family are feeling better.

Bloody fucking BRILLIANT! 5 stars and a fave!

Jolie histoire, une autre vision de l'arroseur arrosé. Il se croyait le mentor alors qu'il n'était que la proie de la jeune chasseresse. J'aimerais me faire chasser de cette façon!

belle façon d'amener l'homme à croire qu'il domine la situation.

J'en connais un qui ne va pas regretter le poisson d'avril.

Je vous souhaite aussi un prompt et total rétablissement.

Pierre

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Dear Ada, I am always excited to read your stories. I check every now and then your profile. I am a fan! I hope the doctors find a way to make you feel better. This Covid hat already taken too many lives and left others complications for those who are still here after becoming it. I personly lost my granny almost two years ago. I miss her too much that I am still not able to hear the audios she sent me to my WhatsApp before she was sick. It is just normal greetings, but I am still too emotional to do it.

I wish you get better and continue writing or do what fills your heart and your creative mind!

Take care!

Raxxell P

Romance,You have this well in hand. Thank you for a smile.

Great story, loved the flip. To be honest I don’t think I would have guessed the ending as quickly if you hadn’t commented that it was part of the April Fools conte.

Sounds like you’ve had a really rough time of it in real life, I hope you and are feeling better.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

Hope you feel better Ada, (sending virtual hug), I haven’t contracted covid yet, but others I know have, it doesn’t sound pleasant at all.

I liked this story it was pleasant and well written and admittedly a sequel would be very welcome, I’m a sucker for romance and love.

Such a frightening side effect to have - but you managed to write your way through it! Well done. I have had a similar side effect from PTSD it can be really hard to get my brain working properly again. It takes me a painfully long time to write and even conversing can be hampered.

I hope you and your family are healing and getting stronger ever day <3

Thank you so much for the kind words, everybody :-) And yes, I'm doing a lot better. Not quite normal (lol, that won't happen anyway), but slowly getting there.

LOL, love the rule, Axelotto :-) Can I borrow it?

I like it hope there is more to this stores!?

To Anonymous from Ada Stuart:

Yes, I have a few more ideas that I would have liked to write into scenes. And also, I believe we should hear Caleb's point of view too - only fair, right?

Loooove this!

really fun story and i coulsn't tell by your writing that covid was a problem in any way. hope you recover fast and fully.

Oh yes, please more!

Hope you'll get recover swiftly without any long symptoms, Ada.

If you do write Caleb's point of view, it would be nice to start earlier and continue further. I mean, it does sound like he has had his eyes on her already for some time, and I like he's planning, or hoping for more than she realises. Just not letting it out quite yet.

Sorry to say, though, that rule Axelotto referred to doesn't hold. Matching is nice even when there is nobody to see but me.

To Strixaluco from Ada Stuart

Marvellous idea! I love it :-) Thanks :-)

And I agree with you on the underwear. I sometimes ask myself: 'Do I really want to wear this in case I have an accident and the paramedics have to cut off my clothes?'

Then again, maybe that's just me, lol.

Enjoyed it!!! Fun read.

Interesting premise, but there is room for so much more development, both before the events described and after. How does an inexperienced submissive go about training an experienced dominant into a relationship? She’s already agreed to exclusivity during the training.

I'm so sorry to hear you were so unwell. I hope you are your whole family get better soon.

I am extremely excited for the rest of this story - please tell me this will become another of your amazing series. I really loved how your gave the impression she planned the whole thing in order to get him. Well done.

Very erotic ! I loved it.

I'm absolutely a fan! The writing is super believable and spicy! The male character is just the broody dominant type you can lust for while reading. I would read a whole novel!

Nice twist at the end so who is fooling who. Sorry to hear you've all had the dreaded lurgy and hope all better now.

There's a distinct possibility this could have been longer for a contest but certainly has the essentials. Maybe you could write this into a series.

Excellent work as always!

Glad to hear you and yours are on the mend.

The little minx.....she found what she wanted and went out and captured him. Love it no matter who is doing the training!

Thanks for sharing!

DP

Wish this was longer....maybe see how he reacts to being trained...would love to see his reaction

To Anonymous from Ada Stuart

"Wish this was longer....maybe see how he reacts to being trained...would love to see his reaction"

Great idea! I love it! I am working on a longer version and this fits perfectly with what I planned to do so thank you so much :-)

The wily female strikes like a cobra!

5

Too short

Enjoyable. A follow up probably would be enjoyable as well.

Enjoyable! The ending twist reminded me how dogs frequently train their owners.

Lol, so true. And cats too.

And I forgot to mention that I have actually finished the longer version of this story. It's published with the same title but it's only available for sale, unfortunately (well, since I spend a lot of time writing and editing it, lol). If you're curious to know where, just check my Bio page.