All Comments on 'Playing It Cool'

by redzinger

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tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Very nice

Enjoyed the story. Thank you for writing it

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Enjoyed the story. Hope to read more about these budding relationships.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
left wanting more...

of course *wink*

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More

I look forward to seeing more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Beginning of a good tale.

Definitely want more of this well-written and absorbing story. Strong character development draws one in. Now you need to tell us the rest of the stories. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

More please! Really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing.

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Awww Sweet Romance****

Good read very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Damned good

Short & Sharp.

A well-told tale with a bit of a twist.

Thank you

HP

Crimson_RiversCrimson_Riversalmost 6 years ago
I like.

I was half expecting someone to grab a room and start making babies, but heck. This works too. Can't shake that feeling of being deprived of that extra contact under the blanket, or a few more moments worth of kisses. Either way; A story worth staying up late for. Now let's check out what else you have...

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11about 5 years ago
Great romance

Well done - thoroughly rounded characters, believable plot and HEA on its way.

Thank you

FireInHisBloodFireInHisBloodalmost 3 years ago

i just have two issues with this story. the snowball war needed to be longer. and more kisses. lots more kisses. but i just love good stories like this. a good wholesome story is always a good find. so thank you for a very well written story.

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I write stories ranging from erotic romance to a few kinkier tales, whatever flows best when I lie down. My full-length Scarlet rugby-themed erotic romance novels are published by Cariad/Accent Press under my pen name, 'Toria Lyons'. If you are reading my submissions on Lit...

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