All Comments on 'Playing the Blues Ch. 02'

This has the makings of a great story. More, more, more!

You must and I repeat MUST keep this story going cant wait for next instalment please hurry

Just like the first part, this one ended just as it was getting interesting. Ending with a description of the band members made it feel rather abrupt.

You have a good story going. I enjoy the time you’re taking to develop the characters and am looking forward to where is story leads. My only flaw I have is I wish your chapters were longer. Just when I get into it, it ends and kind of ruins the flow. Or maybe I’m just impatient. Keep them coming.

I really like where this is going, ah but what of Jenny I wonder how many times she will be hit on before the night is over and will she take up some offers for a couple of dances we will see, looking forward to the next part

Was so glad to see a new chapter but it ended kind of abruptly. Hope next one if coming soon.

Good addition. Waiting for chapter three.

OK, you've hooked me. I want to hear all about what's going to happen to Jenny.

Fun so far though I hope you keep the theme of her being straight yet still falling into a lesbian romance. I mean not suddenly gay she should struggle amd still find it difficult . Usually its such a fast and complete turn. This looks like it might be more realistic

So far so good. I am liking the story. It's well written and so easy to read. It's like you're right there in the store with Jenny buying the valves for Boris, her amp and at the club Silk, where they will be playing. My only gripe is the story's too short. Just when you're getting into it, bam, it's over and I'm like aww:( Thank goodness part 3 is written.

Nothing really to add here that hasn't already been said. There's a saying, Rome wasn't built in a day. Nor is straight to lesbian. A build up will give more realism. Ahaz, you're doing good. Keep it going

Second Paragraph ! She's describing what she is doing ; crying her eyes out ! However it's written as eyed out ! OOPS ...

WAS EXPECTING A BIT MORE PERSONAL DISCOVERY OR PERSONAL REVEALATION

SO IMAGINE MY SURPRISE WHEN I GOT BUTTKIS INSTEAD !

I really liked this, and am glad to see you taking it in the direction you are. Love her dedication to her art and looking forward to seeing it blossom.

We didn't need to know the numbers of the amp valves and the writing is a bit dodgy (check apostrophes) but the story is great!