All Comments on 'Playing the Blues Ch. 03'

Hope this is the beginning of a sweet and loving relationship between Jenny and Kate.

I have loved you story, and yes 5 stars each time. Like other comments in past chapters though I wish they were a little longer, and they seem to end just as it's getting really interesting.

Kudos for you craftmanship, but rather read a 10 pager all at once rather than a page a day lol.

Please continue with this series. I'm a sucker for romance. Great job by the way Five Stars. I really enjoy your characters and the build up to budding romance.

I'm not usually one of these readers who calls for more for the sake of it but you're on a roll with this story so keep it going. I noticed far fewer errors in this chapter although there are some---eg "...taking her queues from Chris..." should be "...taking her cues from Chris..." Whatever. For me the best part of the chapter comprised the several paragraphs in which Jenny was watching the two women so obviously head-over-heels in love. That was a very touching sequence, I think one of the best I've read about lesbian love.

Better and better, now we know what jenny will be doing after her set is done, maybe dancing with kate and then who knows what will happen after the night is over just one thing though I hope the next part is a little longer than just one page

You got my attention with your story. Doing good.

This is the first of your stories I have read. Being a straight guy(you say) I can see why you have made them short stories, not quit sure how to be a bi curious girl.

Keep it up, I am sure the inspiration will come to you.

Read all 3 in one go and hope there is more to follow. It flows well and has lots of emotion - loved it

I very much love this story, and look forward to its continuation. well done!

Getting better all the time.

waiting for 456

Slowly. Ease into it...try to be a bit different from the usual suddenly lesbian or the somewhat more rare suddenly bisexual(but in practice lesbian). You have the set up for the rare unicorn story of a straight woman stumbling into a lesbian relationship. The hard part is sticking to that without falling into the usual overdone tropes. I think you van do it though if you are careful. Good luck! I'm rooting for you

I agree with the previous comment. There’s no need to rush into things. It’ll be far more realistic if a relationship develops slowly. This will be a huge adjustment in Jenny’s life and shouldn’t be made like flicking a light switch. I’d also love to see the chapters longer than one page, but that’s just me being selfish. This is so good, I just want more to read. This is wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to reading what happens next.

Loving the pace. It's erotic in that my head is building the pictures that suggest sensual love between two unused to relationships that are about genuine love. Can't wait for future chapters.

I would appreciate if you wrote some more chapters soon I’m really interested I’m where the story is going.

Nice to have the flash back to know that Kate had a crush on her earlier. This is so going in the right direction,