All Comments on 'Playing the Blues Ch. 04'

You've got a good thing going here, ahaz. I'm still thoroughly enjoying the story and if you keep up your current standards, then I think I'll enjoy it to the end. One minor point: 'Justin Heywood' should read 'Justin Hayward' (unless there's a deeply closeted Justin Heywood I don't know about!). Anyway, keep up the good work.

And it is getting better and better with each part and Jenny has some good friends to help her make up her mind, watch out Kate, Jenny is coming for you

Nothing new, its the same as most. Maybe a little more drawn out but its the same as most attempts. Feelings came out of nowhere and very suddenly gay with little development. Was hoping for more so it was a but of a let down. Nothing new here at all.

Please finish the story. You are a great writer but you stop just when the story gets good. Resolution is needed for maximum enjoyment

Im excited for the next chapter !!!

You need to get the next chapter done so fast. Brilliant

I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter. This is good. Love it.

OK - as an earlier comment points out - 'nothing new in this', but it's a great package with interesting characters, and very nicely told. Really looking forward to developments in the forthcoming chapters.

Its a repeat of most attempts and not even a great one since the hot scenes are taking forever and its all the same old stuff. The whole thing seems rushed yet nothing is happening. Its an odd combination. Enjoyable but a bland repeat of many others, just names are changed

Great story. Thanks for taking your time. Im looking forward to more.

Awaiting next chapter....keeps me reading love it

I have read the first three pieces of that series, and I liked them a lot. I had the feeling you were writing these, because you had them already in you and they wanted to get out. And well done (a few mistakes here and there didn't spoil it).

But this one here is a bit confused, and feels a bit forced and rushed. As if you got a lot of positive comments and felt compelled to bring out part 4.

Also, at least for me, it didn't help this time, that there were too many names rather similar. Sometimes I had to get back and check who was saying what.

I am not sure if one can edit a published story and republish it, but if so, you should go over this one and change it a bit, and take your time to do so. Don't rush things, you can do better, as we all have seen.

Waiting for the next part.

After amassing a reasonably large following and body of work, this author decamped from here and SOL a few years ago after whiffing the ending of I Have To Remember... Then a couple of years later started repopulating his SOL account for a couple of months after promising cleaned up and re-edited versions of his catalog. That was fine for a few months until he seems have gotten bored with the exercise and again disappeared (with some stories still not re-posted to their original state let alone updated).

So I was happy to see those stories coming back here... and now it seems that he got bored even faster.

pity...

whens chapter 5

its a shame this story didnt get a conclusion ,. Did Jenny find Kate ?, did Jenny became a lesbian ? Did the band get back together ?

Anxiously awaiting next installment ! Honestly after checking last release date I'm not expecting it Too bad though it did have a good was . Though I was extremely disappointed that you chose Kate for Jenny's mate . I was captivated by the possibilities for her and Amy !😘

This was another good one. It would be marvellous if you'd continue it.

I have just read your four stories a few times when can you write more about these girls specially Jenny and Kate please you have written these stories fantastic and cannot wait for more of tthe same please ahaz.xxxx

Nice idea but the writing is rough. Poor punctuation and inadequate editing.

Please finish the story, this is great so far

Finished and saw this was the last and verbally said nooooo. Damn I wanted more, a resolution something. The last sentence could have at least been here pulling up in front of the music store.