All Comments on 'Playing with Brother'

by Elextra

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good Story

Aw gee why you cut them of ending story put more on ch. 02 thanks cfh

tinman69stinman69sover 18 years ago
Come on now!!!

You know you have to tell the rest of the story!!! Tell us about the ice cream and how it was used and how many times they made each other happy that day!!

Alien47Alien47over 18 years ago
So hot!

Even hotter than the Daddy story! Wow!! Thanks!!!

What's next?

aysa69aysa69over 18 years ago
Brother's are the best

now this is what i love, a loving brother who gives you what you want and need. this one was way better than daddy. i absolutely loved it. twice as hot and twice as naughty. now will we see her getting daddy and brother at the same time?? sharing is caring. GREAT JOB

ffreakffreakover 18 years ago
Dreams can come true

I like the way you made her dream become a reality with a substitution. There's a better chance of keeping the secret longer with her brother than her father. I do hope you have a third episode for us - one that tells us just how good that ice cream tastes all over the rest of her.

jussforfunjussforfunover 18 years ago
WOW!

Awesome story, I was transfixed, couldn't read it fast enough then had to go back and read it slower so I could capture the mental images even firmer in my mind!

David48David48about 18 years ago
What next?

Sis? Mom? Dad? Cousin Bubba? Looks like you have a bunch of chapters to write. Tittilate me...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nicely done and grown up people know .............

......what happens next and how it feels

Jenny6969Jenny6969about 18 years ago
You are on your way..

You keep me wet with your hot little stories. Let's have more, dear.

MarilynmwfMarilynmwfalmost 18 years ago
Just right--Just enough to make your story........

..believable--No oversized equipment, nomultipal day long encounters followed by an all night encounter-

JUST RIGHT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Lucky Brother

Really enjoyed your story. I just hope that wasn't the last of this series. Please keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
love

More please. I love your writing

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