All Comments on 'Playing with Fire Pt. 01'

Now hurry up and get to part 2!

this was so hott, i cant wait to read part 2!!!!! please hurry!!!!

Of the highest order, sir!

Please finish this one before you finish “Mary” and “Kristin”. Those are two great story, but this one is super-nova HOT!

Get to work!

Your speciality seems to be the push and pull of the tease til it's perfectly unbearable. There's always a payoff. Wonderful, thank you. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Your writing is superb, but I gave you a 3 for the abrupt ending.

I really hope you finish this story soon.

Well done

That's the kind of daughter I'd love to have living with me. I'll guarantee you I wouldn't 'chicken' out. She'd be getting all the boning she could ever hope for, and I'd be sucking her sweet cunt until she cried 'chicken'.

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