All Comments on 'Playing with the Pizza Boy'

You injected a bunch of interesting elements in this well written tale. Thanks for writing it and thanks for letting people such as I read it.

Really enjoyed this. Could use a little editing, but still a really good story.

I liked it very much. I think you need to go into extra innings and keep this story line going

Great story! And not just for your first effort. For ANY effort! Easily a 5. I don't know how they judge this contest, but even though I've given a 5 or two to others also, yours easily has my vote. And I see you already have 21 followers. Looks like you've impressed others much the same as you have me. Make that 22 followers, as soon as I finish this.

Pedestrian sex between a shallow, egotistical bitch and a likeable idiot with no self-respect.

One and if not ne of the best stories let me say the best story I have read. Great work

Thank you!

Write more, please!

There's a Dominos two blocks away...

I wonder if they're hiring? ;+PPPPP