All Comments on 'Playing with Their Toys'

Do write a sequel!! This was not a bad start at all and don't worry about any negative anti-incest comments. The ones who read such stories and then criticize them are hypocrite. The only constructive criticism I have is to do a better job proof-reading. Spell check will not catch "their" if it should be "there" for instance. Good luck and I look forward to reading more.

Like the previous writer, i agree, not bad. As with anything created by humans, there is room for improvement, but overall, a good story. A little more attention to the mechanics of writing, and you will have an excellent series here. Keep going, please

This was agreat story please do more

if you write a sequel, let it be relistic..

You should keep writing, you definitely show talent.

More please!

I think the story is very good and the sequel will be simply fantastic. On with the sequel.

This is super erotic, and wonderrful! Hurry with more!

This is super erotic, and wonderrful! Hurry with more!

Great story, only thing i would say though is that the ending lacked the detail contained in the rest of the story, fantastic overall though,