All Comments on 'Playtime with Daddy in the Attic'

by Blackbeards14

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Sonnyw55Sonnyw55over 2 years ago
Too rushed

Too rushed

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 2 years ago

Nice story. Jumped right into the action. What Mary doesn’t know won’t hurt her.

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxover 2 years ago

good deal the stories you did ( stepfather \ Heather ) . so does it mean we supposed read them in order -

especially how this story it begins

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

Might have been better if they were actually related like to category dictates. Why do people put step- anything in this. Category? To me it seems they don't have the balls to make them actual relatives. Almost always the story would work the same, but better because they are related.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 2 years ago

That was hot. I would love to hear more adventures from them.

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