All Comments on 'Pleasant Surprise for Mom'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sequel?

Volume 2 on the way soon? We hope!Nz

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 5 years ago
Quite arousing.

Please continue

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 5 years ago

A good start but it have been better if it was longer.

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
sexy story

i hope there's a chapter 2. there's a lot more to this story

Omart57Omart57over 5 years ago
Wow!

Just fucking,Wow!!! Great little story!

tribelover330tribelover330over 5 years ago
More

anxiously await more1 Good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
CATEGORY? * * * * *

Hi Maria,

This one is porn - in my book. Definitely beautiful, dirty, descriptive, lusty, well-written five star Porn. Well done. Lot's more of this please... you are damn good.

Jack Auff

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This story was much better.......

However.......... as a female you should know that a cock cannot cum into a womb.

When a cock cums in a woman, the sperm have to swim from the end of the vagina up to the womb.

AmazonBeauty1966AmazonBeauty1966about 5 years ago
I will never understand ...

.... why people insist on insertinging the technical into a fantasy ... Makes no damn sense!!! This was a delightful tease, a hot and nasty quickie ~ don't leave us hanging! This 'Pleasant Surpise' screams for another chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Didn't like it.

I don't read interracial stories.

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