All Comments on 'Please Sir, I Want Some More'

What happens next?? Your characters are, to say the least, very interesting. Your world feels very post-apocalyptic and wonderfully strange. Damien and the Veteran seem destined for a remarkable love story. Please continue!

I loved the characters and the setting, I really want to find out more about them. The sex was really sexy, well done! I'd be really glad if you wrote a continuation of the story.

I agree with all of the last and first comment.

And I point out that you have yet to tie in the title with the story. :) Properly anyway.

Give the readers what they want. We want more than the cake you started us off with. We are now demanding meat!!!! I think you're cruel not continuing this piece. Would love to see Damien getting what he wants.

Damn good! And so well written! Gods, I want some more! Please!

Write more, sooo good!

Very nice

Keep it up!

^_^

Please add more to the story.