All Comments on 'Pleasure Cruise'

by Sean Renaud

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Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Stupid Crap

Why bother a waste of time.

mBrow about 14 years ago

Wham Bam ...

Technically good writing, but the story seems short and shallow. Stretch it out, add some swingers ...

Magnus_St0rm almost 14 years ago

Dialogue made this better than most

I really enjoyed her part in the banter.

**For the 'swinger' comment: That would have moved this story into the Group Sex category, where, incidentally, you should look if you want stories with swingers.**

Great job! Encore!

KingRichard923 almost 14 years ago

Nicely woven

You put together one mighty fine story there.

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