All Comments on 'Pleasure in Paradise'

This was amazing, so hot! Best story I have read in ages, I hope you continue Hayley and Tina's story.

Thanks a lot for that story!

I´m a chubby woman myself and met a lot of guys who stated being just into sporty types. ...Once they felt my special embrace, they were hooked.

Holy fuck what a great story and incredible stroke material. I love a cheating husband story where there are things going on right under the wife's nose and you have done that and added to it ten fold. The dirty nasty slutty sex was just incredible. So depraved and animalistic. Not enough people appreciate pure raw fucking like that. It was so dirty that it took me multiple attempts to make it through this story since I kept blasting my excitement all over the keyboard.

Thank you for writing yet another hot story and posting it here.

What kind of person is excited or entertained by that kind of abuse?

She lay back on the bed or she laid back on the bed?

Try not to write as you speak.

'black one piece bikini on.' - surely there's no such thing? A one piece swimming costume maybe.

Very amateurish.