by MarshAlien
Hahaha absolutely hilarious and clever writing too. Could have been set on a Beach the Boys all relaxing telling interesting tales. By the way when he got into the proper rhythm was it 45rpm ( Rogering per minute) 🤣🤣
I loved it. great rest of working in the song. you could always include time travel to explain the anachronisms, after all it's not your first rodeo - stitch in time anyone?
Having sailed the caribbean and once on a three masted square rigger this is a great tale definitely captured the grizzled old man and how to tell a story
'Tis a bottle o' me best rum ye be deservin' fer that wee tale. Aye, that an a full tankard t' slake yet thirst whilst I fetch the bottle.
The fact that I read the pirate in the voice of Geoffrey Rush, with herself being no less than Maureen O'Hara, made this even more fun. Thanks!!
While catching up on stories from before I joined Literotica, I ran across this titbit of smuggery. Very clever wordplay and a kaleidoscopery of anachronisms.
A very interesting tale, In a writing style that just begs to be used to bad ends. The only thing that pulled me out of the story was when I realized the 'poetry' was lyrics, from a time period far in advance of the apparent setting of the tale. Come to think about it, that is probably the one fault with the whole story - at first it's unclear the time frame of the story, and throughout it, your hints as to period seem slightly conflicting. Overall, I enjoyed this story.<p>
Thanks for sharing it with us!
fucking hilarious marsh. it was all serious and then BAM beach boys!!! you are so the man.
Your tale left no doubt of your enthusiasm. Loved it.
Consider yourself duly killed, albeit by the limitation of a mere 5-star system. I trust you won the challenge; this was a delightful little tale.
-- KK in Texas