All Comments on 'Pledge Night'

Great story. Very well written. Just would suggest having somebody review it before publishing to catch the couple of typos.

Maybe?

Alonso tells Alex, that he doesn't care if the piece of ass he gets is 99 years of age, and a quadriplegic. Millions of people around the world, including I, am unlucky enough to have some incident in their lives leaving them with quadriplegia. Many lead active and enjoyable sex lives.

Your description makes all quadriplegics sound among the lowest of life forms, that even sex with one of those will qualify Alex to be an "Omegaman". Perhaps some day, you may find yourself in that situation, and only worthy of only a "Charity fuck", because someone takes pity on you, or to qualify for some fraternity.

Anonymous could have explained about quadriplegics better than just jumping down your throat about it... But fuck it I give it 10/10... Keep up the superb writing