All Comments on 'Plumper Caught in the Rain'

Overall, the story is fairly good. But regardless of your country of origin, "waste" and "waist" are definitely not the same word. (Think about it....)

-- KK in Texas

This is a very nice story. There may be minor technical problems, but it is a good first shot! I hope to read more of this writer's works.

Nice story line, but future stories need better proof reading.

Pussy doesn't have an "e"