All Comments on 'Plundering Her Pirate Booty'

One of the hottest stories I have read on this site in years. The sex was so intense and, as important to me, believable. You certainly have an affinity for this type of writing. Thank you for your efforts and I will anxiously await your next submission.

very HOT story, expertly written & descriptive. Most of all, believable!

Great job. I enjoyed the details.

Pretty hot, I gave 4 stars.

Needs minor proofreading for spelling & pronoun use, which is pretty typical on here.

The one that kills me is how often 'loose' is misused for 'lose': it's 'lose herself.'

The opening doesn't really flow. You might try starting with her at work, the dissatisfaction, then her pursuit of the guy. Then describe the roommate, the previous parties, & using this one to entice the grey-haired guy. Was his name ever given?

Flesh out the characters & the situation; what she does (real estate) is given as an aside to her sexual experience.