All Comments on 'Pocket Rocket'

A beautiful story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

Wonderful story. Thank you!

You have a talent for romance. This was lovely. Thank you.

Lovely! Thank you

Loved this story! A great romance story of a guy and a girl finally receiving that love they craved. 5/5 again!

Loved this story. I especially loved the epilogue that wrapped things up nicely. Too many of the stories on Literotica get to their conclusion, and then just sort of disappear. You drew your characters to be complete people, and then you tied a nice bow around the end of the story, and did not cut me off sort of in midsentence. Thank you for that. Now if I can borrow a little of your culture, I’ll say “g’ day mate” and go looking for another story from you.

WOW!! Thanks for your wonderful story.

Beautiful story!! thank you very much.

Lovely story! I enjoyed the regional speech patterns and sports tidbits (had to look up RSL :)). Great MCs whom I’d love to see in a future adventure. Thanks for writing this story. 5*

Beautiful story, love it. I too had to look up RSL. 5⛤

Not one of your best but still a good story. Took a second to wonder why Hailey didn't want to be sans hair down below and then it dawned on me; to much of a chance that the guy would get off pretending something that can get you jail time in real life. Thanks

Delightful story!

5

As I gave up your norma stomping grounds genre this year, it's nice to see you dabble in one of the genres I still frequent. Always well written, I will complain that while you write some complex, twisting plot lines elsewhere, they one was very straight forward from start to finish. I was expecting something like Hailey "knew" Penny or something when the families met, but nothing. LOL! The epilogue was sensational and tied everything up other than the "no more children" thing. Just say "age' or "two is enough" next time rather than something nebulous despite no birthing complications. 4.4*

Great read, thank you for writing.

Not a lot of drama in it but that’s ok, just a simple romance story that was beautifully written, 5 stars

Wonderful

This was another of your stories that was easy to give 5 stars to. But, all during the latter half of this story I was expecting you to throw in the slut ex-wife to throw some drama to the story and try to get between them with some kind of crap.

Not bad, but there is less strife and feelings than in your other romances. 4/5

A good story as usual but I kept waiting for something.

When I saw the title 'Pocket Rocket' in the new stories list I had to read it. It's the by-line to my Literotica name. BTW, I had no idea that the term has different meanings in different cultures! Being 4'10" myself, I was curious to see what your story would be like. One thing you got absolutely spot on was the way some men view petite women. For me, it's exacerbated by the fact that I'm 24 but look about 17. Dates either treated me like a fragile porcelain doll or they wanted me to call them "Daddy". Thankfully, my husband did neither. I enjoyed the story and yes, I prefer to be on top but not always. I write stories and though they are fictional, I have/am increasingly giving the lead female character my own physical attributes. So anyway, you did a good job and I was able to identify with Hailey. 5*

Another excellent story. thanks.

You've got to laugh at the audacity and stupidity of his ex-wife. Wanting to fuck other guys but keep him as a backup, I mean really? Sounds like a LW story plot with a husband they think they can cuck. Certainly has the required level of entitlement and delusion for the wife character. Hearing that she deeply regrets her actions is satisfying although it's still pretty sad that stupidity like that can cause someone to throw away what could have been an incredible life together. Oh well. At least Chris found true love and got the family he always wanted in the end.

A beautiful story of love and connection, finding that special someone you know is just right for you. You really have a way with words, and especially your epilogues. It's hard to leave your stories with dry eyes because you always seem to be able to pull at the heartstrings well. On a personal note, I love shorter women. There's just something about them I can't quite explain. Not that I don't like average or tall women or anything like that, but small women... damn if they don't crank the furnace to *extra* hot. So this story really satisfied me on an extra level because of that "kink".

Curious question from scandinavian perspective; what is the obsession with getting married? I'm old(ish) and have no problems understanding families forming without any formal signup procedure, I think half of the kids are born outside formal marriage these days. I know there's legislation supporting this in scandi countries, that might not exist elsewhere and it probably plays in.

Curious though, is the institution of marriage still this significant in Australia?

Mikko, conservative American here, yes marriage for families and even for living together is the norm. While many marriages do end in divorce, ( my brother in law is on his third) we’ve been married 43, my sister 53, my brother 60. So most people here have not been divorced While parental rights, property, expenses, can be handled by other legal documents . Marriage swoops them all in one even if divorce comes later.

You`re not small,honey, you're fun-sized...(from a candy bar ad).....and there was this one girl back in college....yeah

Another great story mate, well done