All Comments on 'Poker Loser'

A great start to a series that could eclipse Office Play!

What a great story - boy, this was hot ! Can´t wait to read the next chapter.

Hi:

I still can't wait for more of Office Play .. but also want more of this!!

alex

Good story! This one was believeable!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

Unbelieveably hot and so well written, please do continue the adventure!

Yes please make it a series. Thanks

A testament to how great a writer you have become is that I love Office Play, and immediately read this because I saw who wrote it. PLUS, as much as I hate anal sex scenes, and get grossed by it, you made this so hot, I can forgive you for jumping to anal before you took her virginity. You must write more, you must continue these two characters, and he must make her reluctantly lose her virginity too! I think you wrote this with a true eye on passion and eroticism, as well as a true reluctant female. Nice job.

Poker Loser

Really enjoyed reading your story....unusual in that he left her a virgin..showing he wasn't just a rapist. Thanks for your effort

This is two for two so far. Keep up the good work.

Loved this story. Giving myself up to someone after losing a game of poker has been a personal fantasy! A series would be great! Keep 'em coming!

very well described poker card games i find erotic.Quite believeble as well keep up the good writing.

One of the best ever of its kind.

I haven't visited here for a couple of years and as I was reading a few, I stumbled across this one. Fantastic as usual. I was a fan of your stories back then and they still stand up as great. Keep it up.

i'm confused.

she had a dildo inside her but she remained a virgin?

Great story!

very nice

This is my 2nd time reading this series... it is sooo hot. kudos for writing a story that is good enough to read multiple times.

Extremely well written and hot. Thank you

I'd love to do that to my sister in law.

A fast moving story with fun action and believable setup.

There are some continuity issues and a few logical errors, but the story was interesting enough to not worry about them.

While knowing it's all fiction here, I appreciated that Todd was careful of Alison while having his way with her: her pleasure was important to him too.

Looking forward to more soon.

This was hot, though I did feel bad that her first time was a nonconsent scenario. I kind of wish you'd played up more of the 'cockteasing, snobbish princess' angle.

My biggest thought (and honestly it distracted me heavily enough that I fell out of the erotic mood somewhat) was her virginity. Does she have a hyman or not? I kept expecting him to pop her hyman with the dildo. Or for him to discover it and back off somewhat. It seems like the dildo was all the way in so I guess the hyman got popped from a previous accident. I guess I'll find out in chapter 3.

This was really bad! I wish after she was used, she would break out, tie todd down, and do the same to him, but with a fake dick. I also wished she left him there, cut out the parts of her on the camera, and call the police. THAT would have been good.

THAT FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT RAPED HER, ABSOLUTELY SICK.

He would have to untie her at some point, time to knife the bastard. Why do you fucking freaks think RAPE is sexy?? What is wrong with you!

I’ve read some of your other stories and enjoyed them more fool me, won’t make that mistake twice.

I can't WAIT until learns she's a virgin!

Please don't normalize rape. Rape scenes like this may influence, and change the preference and behaviour of readers (or viewers of videos) towards the notion of rape. There should at least be a clear and highly visible warning at the beginning. I was raped and this has triggered a very dark memory and added a layer of trauma and fear into my mind. Please don't normalize rape.

I’m wondering what some of these commenters think “non-consensual” means. If nonconsent stories make you uncomfortable, then don’t browse in the nonconsent tab.

Like me I’m guessing that those who think this is sickening enjoy RELUCTANCE stories. The mental trauma of rape which is exactly what this is is absolutely devastating. Made worse if the victim orgasms whilst being raped.

I was shocked that this was a full on rape story. Worse that the bastard filmed it. It’s sickening that people revel in crimes of violence like this. Is it supposed to be acceptable because she’s a petty bitch who enjoys being a cocktease?

It’s vastly different from a “Rape Fantasy” which is the thrill arising from being helpless usually CNC, this is just a fantasy story about rape, all kinds of wrong as well as being non erotic and a disaster.

Tess (uk)

RAPE. There should be a disclaimer at the top for full on rape stories, even under non-consent category. This was disturbing and triggering.

I enjoyed the fantasy, thank you for thinking this one up.

This is the non-consent/reluctance category. Don't complain about a story here containing non-consent and reluctance.

Maybe they feel ashamed that they're attracted to these types of stories but can't stop reading things they supposedly despise. That's why they are so outraged in these comments.