by Sruby67
What a sneaky twat! Can't stand these stories with betraying wives and weasel neighbors!
If you don't like it dont fucking read it or perhaps you like to read and complain about the theme of the story due to a hidden fantasy?? Either way shut up. I liked it personally
nothing like almost caught sex, it is just sex, not love, so keep up the erotic play. I agree it could be longer and with more seduction, but wow this was good.
surely the other poker players would have missed him, especially the naive cuckolded hubby. An enjoyable romp .
Stories like these are erotic entertainment, a release valve if you will. Sure the pretense of this story is fucked up, 2 people cheating on their spouses, but its just fantasy. Ive been faithfully married for well over 10 years. I love my wife and wouldnt cheat her but id be lying if i said i never thought about it either. Get a grip folks. End of rant. Btw, before you critics shoot holes in this hot story, write your own first. So sick of people picking apart the work of others when they cant seem to produce any work of their own. Great story, i enjoyed it. A pretty pair of eyes can make a guy lose his shit,lol.
Thank you for the feedback! I am pretty new to this so I always appreciate feedback.