All Comments on 'Poker Night'

by Sruby67

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WstCstWstCstabout 7 years ago
super hot

Now, you are the neighbor I always wanted but never had))

GoodhueGoodhueabout 7 years ago
Kick Her to the Curb!

What a sneaky twat! Can't stand these stories with betraying wives and weasel neighbors!

tattooed_cowgirl15tattooed_cowgirl15about 7 years ago
@ goodhue

If you don't like it dont fucking read it or perhaps you like to read and complain about the theme of the story due to a hidden fantasy?? Either way shut up. I liked it personally

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
HOT

Got my panties wet!

liz33ndliz33ndabout 7 years ago
let him catch them i action

nothing like almost caught sex, it is just sex, not love, so keep up the erotic play. I agree it could be longer and with more seduction, but wow this was good.

Stevep571Stevep571about 7 years ago
A nice sexy tale but...

surely the other poker players would have missed him, especially the naive cuckolded hubby. An enjoyable romp .

RuffRidingHoodRuffRidingHoodalmost 7 years ago
Chill People

Stories like these are erotic entertainment, a release valve if you will. Sure the pretense of this story is fucked up, 2 people cheating on their spouses, but its just fantasy. Ive been faithfully married for well over 10 years. I love my wife and wouldnt cheat her but id be lying if i said i never thought about it either. Get a grip folks. End of rant. Btw, before you critics shoot holes in this hot story, write your own first. So sick of people picking apart the work of others when they cant seem to produce any work of their own. Great story, i enjoyed it. A pretty pair of eyes can make a guy lose his shit,lol.

Sruby67Sruby67almost 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you RuffRidingHood

Thank you for the feedback! I am pretty new to this so I always appreciate feedback.

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