by Drunks
it would have been much better if i didn't have to take the time to figure out what you were trying to say. you may want to reread your stories before posting, as your grammar and spelling (bold?) are atrocious.
Finally someone taking a strip poker story the whole way, net getting to hot to soon and just put the caracters into an orgy as soon as the first nip slip. Just building it up so nice from start to end.
Great writing looking forward to more