All Comments on 'Poker Night: All In'

by BreedOrBeBred

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Time for new friends and a new life as a single man.

OdiouserOdiouseralmost 3 years ago

Your words are nearly error-free which makes for a good read. But, for someone who loves to play poker, your lack of knowledge of the game is very distracting. No one would host a game with only 3 or 4 players expected.

Anyway, I liked this.

oldMasseuseGuyoldMasseuseGuyalmost 3 years ago

well written and beautifully descriptive. Described Jess as one Hot Wife!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

My husband and I are in our 50’s. My sister and her husband are about 5 years older. We were on vacation two years ago and have.never seen our spouses naked or each other since high school. My husband, on the beach, wears speedos and, of course the outline of his penis can be seen. First day on the beach laying out in the sand my sister said to me , can I ask you a question? Yes, of course ! We have been married for over 30 years and never discussed our husband’s genitalia. Can I ask how big (made up name!) Tom is? My husband is average I think! But looking at Tom in that speedo, he looks pretty large. I said, I do not know! That night after dinner and back at the condo we were having drinks and my sister said let’s play cards! After an hour she said who is up to strip poker? Her husband, Jim,(again, made up) said we are family, risky. Oh come on, not swapping partners just cards. I knew that my sister wanted to see Tom’s penis. We agreed to play but NO sex. But questions and touching were agreed to. We played and were laughing and having a drink. My sister and I were not doing well and were down to bra and panties quickly! Tom and Jim were first to ask questions. Cup size ; my sister said, laughing, a”D” which is my size as well. The men were still sitting with three or four bits of clothing on. my sister lost and her husband said to Tom, my husband, remove her bra. My sister stood and looked nervous as she came close to Tom her breasts seemed to be pulsating. Toms hands went behind and his fingers undid the clips her breasts fell and her nipples were rock hard. My sister put her hands on to her breasts and massaged her large breasts. I then lost twice in a row and Jim took both my panties and bra off. Then my sister lost and the twig us were naked. My sister was shaved. Could not believe it!! My sister then said I propose that now we just undress each other’s husband. So, one piece at a time until the men were down to under pants. My sister went first , my husband wears tiny briefs, my sisters fingers were reaching inside the elastic waist, Tom was big but flaccid. My sister said “how do I do this”. Laughing. Just pull them down I said. Tom’s penis looked massive as he stood in front of us all. I asked the question, put both hands around the shaft and see if it gets hard. Her hands wrapped around and not just yet. You take off Jim underwear. I did, he was shaved as well. His penis was erect and was about 5 to 6 inches long and thin. A smallish head. My sister then went back to placing her hands around my husband’s penis. This is so big, she said! Sorry, Jim. But look! After my husband’s erection and both men settled down to a flaccid state. My sister had oil and we massaged each other. My nipples felt great. Let’s play music and dance. First, rock, our breasts were bouncing all over and the men’s penis were swinging as well. My sister then changed the music to slow. We started with each other’s spouse Our large breasts were a rousing the men. Both had erections! And both were squeezing and rubbing our nipples. I then said time to change partners. We did and went to bed and I had great sex

LustyScribeLustyScribealmost 3 years ago

Didn't do it for me, and I normally like the "poker night" scenario. Her completely cold, callous, "I don't give a fuck about my husband" was off-putting, and nothing in her character development made that seem plausible. If she were my wife, she'd be my ex-wife soon afterwards. Otherwise well-written, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Yes of course she is a cuckolding bitch. But the husband did nothing said nothing so he deserves everything he gets. Just another wimp pathectic cuck story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Super sexy story! Please give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Superb read super sex! Hope you continue on with her adventures in fucking other men... Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nothing like letting your fertile wife fuck you best friend and get a white washed uterus. What a turn on! Bareback feels so much better. I'm sure it will not be the only time either. Once you give her permission once, who knows how many will get lucky. Hope the baby looks like her and not your friend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I kind of feel bad for the husband since he didn’t seem thrilled about her going without a condom much less his friend shooting his load in her to impregnate her. Curious what will happen to their marriage. Ultimately this is just a story. On the other hand i the sex was super hot. Damn, a man like that could take me. I definitely wouldn’t mind someone who knows how to truly fuck and takes control. Definitely enjoyed their session. I bet she hopes he wins a lot more to have him in her again. Very much enjoyed this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Everyone in this story should be staked out over a fire ant mound naked in the sun. Not one redeeming character, just a bunch of depraved assholes.

NSCPLNSCPLalmost 2 years ago

Contrary to what several of your readers said, this is one of the best poker night scenario stories I've read on Literotica. I wasn't sure I liked Michael at first because he came off as a bit arrogant but he treated the situation with and Jess and Phil with respect. I certainly hope you add a sequel describing the next poker night get together. Perhaps one where Jess has her sister/girlfriend over to play or another guy brings his wife and Michael ends up doing her bareback as well.

curious9632curious9632almost 2 years ago

I liked it, I'm down to read another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I mean I guess that's a good way to communicate to your husband that he should divorce you... Going for the most impact, making it crystal clear to him how much you've lost respect and love for him. I mean it would be kinder just to shoot him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fucking fantastic and so hot. Well written and excellent pace. Reveling in the eroticism and depravity over here! Kudos and when does pt 2 come out?

curious9632curious9632over 1 year ago

this needs a part two, good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

LOL, yet another wife who can't control herself. It seems that's all we get here nowadays.

Rw43Rw43over 1 year ago

It is a very good development of the Poker Night scenario, and the sex is plenty hot.

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However, Jess’ narrative gives the impression that Phil wasn’t on board with the sex play as much as resigned to allowing a strong woman to “own her own body”—until she gives it away, of course. At the beginning, not only did he approve of his wife’s enticing outfit, but he calmed her anxiety by saying, “whatever happens, happens” and “nothing that happens could be as crazy as that other time”. So it seems as though he had written her a blank check.

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So maybe she got a little carried away; she certainly got to the point where she stopped considering hPhil’s feelings about any of her words, actions or decisions; and I found it a red flag that her narrative didn’t include Phil’s vote about what would happen in 2 weeks. Has Jess supplanted Phil in the game? If so, i think the marriage is over. Even without the next scheduled game, they have a lot to work through.

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