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sandymonroesandymonroeabout 10 years ago

I think I found a new favourite today :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

One totally fucked up master who obvisouly doesn't care for his sub. He let men who were in all cases unaware of what they were doing beat his sub. The could have damaged her especially the one that beat her back.

cam2012cam2012about 10 years agoAuthor

I suppose it could be construed that way, the unsaid part of the story is that the Master in it doesn't allow anything to happen to his sub without knowing about it. I assumed it sounded like they knew what they were doing, I wrote it to try to portray that, saying they were gauging their distance and testing their swing, I'm fairly new at writing though so maybe that didn't come across. In the fantasy each person that wields an implement against her are d/s players as well, each very knowledgeable in its use. She is also masochistic so enjoyed every single thing that was done to her. She likes to be used and so her Master gives her what she wants.

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