by lioness_71
I enjoyed this so so much, I love the antagonism between them and the fact that as much as they want it to it doesn't get in the way of the burning attraction they have for each other. I'm so pleased you decided to continue this story and very impressed at how you've pulled it off too, its believable and fascinating to learn more about the different back stories you've dreamt up for them.
Can't wait for the next instalment!
Esther x
I love your writing style and the story is sexy as hell. I love how you use Lizzy's family to give the story character and depth! Very well done!
The chemistry between the two is palpable. Not surprised she gave in so quickly. That scene was quick and hurried and hot as hell. It'll be interesting to see what happens when they aren't being watched liked hawks.
Would be even better if the POV stopped sliding around. I’m trying not have a conniption over the made up word “konipshin”.