by Moondrift
I thought that this story was very well written and well explained, so that the characters seemed alive.The only thing that I would like to have seen would be more sex between Polly and Eric.It just seemed like the end of the story was a little rushed.It might be the fact that I just wanted the story to continue, because I was enjoying the read. Thanks for the very good story.....Rich
and it took a tiny flea to bring them together and produce a child...a lovely story full of love and belonging.....
How refreshing to read such a well written and fun story! Well done. Kal