All Comments on 'Polynomial Mom'

You hinted at watersports, I do hope you write more chapters of this and develop that theme.

Hope will hear more of Marie, Larry and Marie

This story could use more chapters, it's gotten

too good to stop now.

Good read and well done.

..THANKS..

USAF

Great start to what could be a phenomenal multi part story. The 3 of them are a good start but would love to see this expand into more women when the word gets out of his gift. So keep the chapters coming.

To many ramblings. Each paragraph has a multitude of themes. Stay focussed!

Need to sort out which tense you are writing in.

Looks like you need to plan the story before writing.