All Comments on 'Pool Boy Ch. 05'

Keep writing and I will keep reading ....thank you for sharing

Please continue this excellent story.

I'm glad to see the Grammar Nazi dropped out.

Ramjet

... that Hunter (or his cock) didn't respond to Alexis' remark "my dad's cum tastes bitter"

my third time reading this epic manuscript. So fabulous

Yep. The Erin and Sam additions aren’t following well for me and it’s throwing me off the rest of the story now. Those extra additions were story blockers. :)