All Comments on 'Pool Boy Ch. 12'

by BigZeke13

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kplusmckplusmcalmost 7 years ago
keep going

I hope you keep this going so many places it could go.

wolverine006wolverine006almost 4 years ago

I think the premise of hiding something from Dee in the beginning is preposterous considering that Emma knew about the "Pizza Guy" the previous night. The only reason she would know anything about that is if she were told about Dee, Hunter, and Alexis' encounter at her apartment in the city. Furthermore, Alexis, Emma, and Dee have nothing to hide between the three of them. Hunter is also included as Emma told him flat out the relationship between them (Alexis, Dee, and her husband) the first time Hunter cleaned her pool. It makes no sense. And the fact that Hunter and Alexis went along with the ruse after visiting Dee in the city, it makes even less sense.

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