All Comments on 'Pool Boy Ch. 14'

by BigZeke13

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kplusmckplusmcalmost 7 years ago
keep going

I am enjoying this story hope you keep it going nice twist with the slot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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incredible sight not site . A site is a location

chrisukbisharechrisukbisharealmost 3 years ago

Loving this new pussy damp quarter twist

FseriesFseriesalmost 2 years ago

Yep. This story line is tanking from its start. Think I’ll end it here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story has lost its way and become an average wank story. The idea of Hunter lecturing Dee that she must talk to Jarrod first about her sex life before he unknowingly has sex with Alexis instead of with Dee is preposterous. The author has forgotten that Hunter had sex with Emma and Alexis before he knew their names. The story has lost its way and become a monotonous chronicle about every attractive woman in the country wanting Hunter's dick solely because it is big.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

2 stewardesses played with his cock, as did the woman in the seat in front of him. 2 of them gave him contact information. Then they win the jackpot. Story is far fetched. Has the author ever been on a plane? Story would have been better if Alexis and Hunter simply joined the mile high club in the lavatory. Maybe Hunter and the woman in seat ahead of him also have a hot time in lavatory while Alexis sleeps (lavatory too small for 3some).

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