by BigZeke13
good work this was worth the wait thank you for your new addition to this episodic story
Loved the incest between Hunter and his mom.
Alexis and Hunter are going to need to announce their engagement soon and have a save the date part in that announcement, just so they know how many of their friends and family members they need to book suites for.
Also if there are any grandparents, cousins, aunts and/or uncles they want to invite to the wedding they need to meet them and seduce them so they will be OK with the nudity and casual sex that will go on during the wedding getaway.
So um umm good, if people complain about the length of the story, you could go back and extend the other three lengthy series to similar series length as this franchise. It's really too bad other authors allow their successful stories or series fall to the wayside, the most notable was Threads: The Island by JimmyJammy, who had a hit and let the potential essentially die, too bad no one will try to reboot, continue, or spin-off that story. I can see your Pool Boy having two more chapters before you move on to a new story or length another series and then in a few years, you return and add 25 more, and return a few years. You should keep up the good work.
I love ALL your stories, hoping you go back and add tonsome of the others. I like the lengthy of the stories, I'm not a fan of 1 pay or 2 pages. I love them long just like you do. Keep up the Great work
i love the relationship that Alexis and Hunter have. Its like a really good dream, certainly a wonderful love story.
I have said before but shall say again, this is by far one of the very best stories on the site and for me out of my few favourites its clearly number one, nothing has knocked it off the top spot although, i have read other really good stories and by other writers but not like this. Not where you can barely put it aside and look so forward to enjoying the next chapter. All the wonderful characters, the wonderful story and the way you have written it and of course, the beautiful love making you have between Alexis and Hunter
I had actually forgotten about the big lottery win. So in essence...bloody brilliant! Forget what some critics have said, its definitely not too long, i could happily read more beyond the 61 chapters