All Comments on 'Pool Day Takes a Turn'

Love it! Wish it was me turned into a sissy and made to cum from ass fucking. Cant wait for what happens next. Xx

That was hot!

This is my favorite story of the month!!! Please continue this as a series.

That was hot

When I started reading I thought it was just going to be a mediocre story but it fooled me and became very hot and exciting. So much so that by the end I was stroking my hard cock. Please continue writing

Great story. Can't wait to see what Mom gives him to wear and what happens and if mom gets involved. I'll be holding my breath(and clit) as I wait. I have cum from being fucked and I love that he did. Best feeling in the world.

Loving this and loving where it could be going, 5* hope there is a part two soon

Oh my that was so hot, can't wait for the next 1.

I absolutely loved the story and can't wait to read more chapters.

FANTASTIC 🔥🔥🔥

I am dripping wet and rock hard with excitement.

Part 2 has a lot of potential as you have set a solid base for a HOT follow up.

Came here from reddit! I really hope you continue this story

Ooooh pleeease continue!!!!!

Keep the embarrassing parts coming. That's what makes it so hot! That, and Mrs. Johnson helping her son with his new gf! I can't wait until the next chapter!

Sooo good, continue the story please!

Loved the story. The getting caught part made it very hot. I look forward to the narrator’s continued feminization.

Thank you guys so much for all the comments. It has really inspired me to write more. The next part is in the works, and it seems like it’s going to be much longer than this one. Please leave any suggestions for this story and future ones below :)

Can't wait for the next Chapter. I've been checking daily for it!!!

I liked it a lot, especially the mom

Great story !!! I would love to be taken like that outside in view of others !!!!

Ohhh Yesss, I think that Randy will easily xform into a sweet Sissy...Randi...Mmmm!!! Get hur legs and crotch shaved and smooth. Thanks for sharing this thread...... xoxoxo ;-)

What a fun lil story :)

Cant wait for part 2!! Great job.

Very erotic and arousing story! Had me super turned on from the moment he put on the suit! Loved his girlfriend shooting video and laughing!

This story is so hot, I loved it!!!

I liked it. A very fun and HOT story. I bet he'll want to take that swimsuit home with him at the end of the day. :-) I'd love to see the video Angie shot.

EXCELLENT READ!