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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
That was great!

Good job! I really enjoyed all of that :)

Sidney43Sidney43about 13 years ago
Good decision

Ex boyfriend is a loser and she needed to move on. The lucky guy may not be the one, but he is a better choice than Mr. fantasy baseball league and that friends and neighbors, is life in the small towns.

DreamPiscesDreamPiscesabout 13 years agoAuthor
Does sound like a small town, huh?

Sidney, the funny part (or maybe NOT so funny) is that the first part about the fantasy baseball is based on actual events...and we did NOT live in a small town at all...here's some hints: South Florida, basketball team, beaches, football team with a very famous quarterback who used to wear the number 13...I love this website; it's all about me exorcising some demons that need to get gone!!! LOL....

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